A sequel to Fits.
Fences crafted out of cheap, crude bamboos stood like imitation-ornaments
along the dusty moon-burnt roads, guarding strips of black soil that bore clusters
of malnourished saplings like uneven chest hair of an old man thinking of
himself as an unusual child who has attained precocious puberty. Fences to
protect a fistful of greenery from the herd, both human and cattle. To increase
the green-ic beauty of the roads even the fences were painted green.
Splinters of green, born out of the muzzles of some
automated science fiction-ed alien shotguns with infinite cartridge capacities
and the ability to spit out those tiny quanta of hell as fast as the chronic
blinking of the eyes of a person responding to some overwhelming temporary stimulus,
shot across the place. Although fluorescent and illusory in appearance those
splinters crept through the thin fabric and the bare skin of people and
accentuated their collective hysteria of synchronised or desynchronised limb-manipulation
and getting acquainted to strangers’ hides under the allowance of an unspoken treaty
of overpriced fun.
The traffic lights turned green at the orthogonal
signals. Sean was midway on the zebra crossing and the uncanny zephyr still irked
him like mosquitoes hovering and buzzing around the ears. Music, that was, he
believed but not the kind he needed right then.
The music stopped. A brief moment of superficial silence was
crafted to overtly dramatise the wave of trance tsunami that was about to
engulf the place, and also to let people catch their breaths. The girl ran to
and fro between this bar and the bar opposite, impinging the sanctity of the eloquent
moves of the crowd on the dance floor, with her lips sealed. ‘Truth or Dare?’
Dare, she had chosen. Now, she needed to fill the empty beer mug placed on this
bar with the liquor she could carry in her mouth from the opposite bar.
Voice of the traffic police, voice of the hawker selling chewing
tobacco, cigarettes and incense sticks, voice of the mother scolding her kid
for throwing tantrums to get the balloon the other kid on vehicle next to them
had, voice of the young girl with an infant in her arms begging for money, voice
of the man shouting over his mobile asking the person on the other end to shout
as well, voice of the old motorbike, voice of the dog limping it’s way to
paradise; voices. The voice inside, ‘Voices’.
Voice of the man asking the bartender for a Screwdriver,
another one asking for a Black Velvet, a woman asking for a Magarita, voice of
the girl in blue stilettos describing how tired and cold she feels after coitus,
voice of the boy passing lewd remarks at every girl he sees, voice of the girl
talking softly to her boy, voice of the new watch, voice of the jerk getting
off with steady hands exploring the female anatomy making his way to the
restroom; voices. The voice inside, ‘Voices’.
Sean, in utter bafflement of the monstrosity of his
ill-fate or snail-pace tripped. The man on the old motorbike hit him hard and shouted
‘Asshole!’ A myriad obscenity followed. The holes of Sean’s ears were violated
so hard that his ears were cleansed. ‘Ah! Voices’, he sighed.
The girl tripped amidst the madness of music, moves,
booze and boots, her lips still sealed. Some complained, some didn’t bother.
She emptied her mouthful (the little she could carry) of liquor in the mug. The
glass overflowed. Her group of friends exclaimed in unison ‘Bitch! You did it.’
Her lips shone with the liquor-y lip gloss still positioned close to the edge
of the overflowing mug. ‘Ah! Voices’, she sighed.
Sean got up and reached the other end of the road not
bothering to get rid of the dust he had amassed from the generous road. He walked
towards the door with the voices in mind. The doorkeeper stamped his arm. The
door swung open.
The hand with the new watch tossed a lit matchstick at
the overflowing glass of liquor. The liquor burned blue and so did her lips. She
turned away and started moving, not bothering to put out the fire she had
acquired from the generous people. She walked towards the door with the voices
in her mind. She glanced at the stamp on her arm. The door was open.
Sean saw the blue amidst the black and green approaching
the door.
The girl saw a silhouette walking in, not green, just black.
Sean held her and kissed her. The blue was lost. All that
remained was green and a lot of black.
Sean made an effort to speak.
Before a sound could escape his mouth she resumed walking
and as she went she said -
“Can’t talk. GN.”
n.b. - Not proofread. Please correct the errors in your mind.
always like the way you write..
ReplyDeleteThe last two posts have been dream like. Is everything right,or nothing's right, it's hard to say. Numbness, of loss, and the drought of the right emotions perhaps, in Sean. He's not dead yet, wouldn't die so easily, but is he alive? I doubt.
ReplyDeleteNice post, and no typos found as such :)
Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete
Well done. This should be called trance literature!!
ReplyDeleteAria - Thank you!
ReplyDeleteAnshul - Well, there's a lot of death(life) left for him to deal with. :)
Girirbala - Haha!
interesting! trance literature will really be a gud name for it!
ReplyDeleteexcellent!!
Excellent is all that I can say.
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ReplyDeleteAbsolutely love your writing style...totally absorbing ... this is just a way to show my appreciation..
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When a great event approaches one's life, life itself has a dream-like exuberance to it. If only the eyes could stop seeing but only in colours like molten hues over one another and just listen to all the cacophony around them.
ReplyDeleteExcellent writing, Sayak.
Megha - Thank you. You are generous.
ReplyDeleteAbhik - :)
elixir_of_life - I am overwhelmed with your gift. Thank you.
Abhishek - Truly so!